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Andy's avatar

Firstly: This is so charming I love the way you've modernized the novel!

Secondly: You've got a bit of a typo, my friend. Where he says "She never got to grew up" I believe you meant "grow up"

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Hi Andy, I really appreciate your comment! This was a pretty tricky entry for me, content-wise, and I'm glad that I apparently pulled it off. - The typo is fixed now, there'll probably be more minor ones in the future though because my grammar assistant keeps actively sabotaging me. Hope you'll continue to enjoy the story! And I'm always glad about feedback.

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